Thursday, January 5, 2012

Journal 22

I was on top of the mountain
I was getting ready to head down
When I noticed that their was a den
Also there was a little town
When I needed to drink from a fountain
There was no water around
It was so cold outside that I felt the need to drown
When I started to head down the hill
I realized I was bound
To head right into a mill
I tried to steer right
But nevertheless I somehow got down to the bottom of the hill
After my great sledding experience I took a bite
Of a great hamburger that was made by Bill
On my way home I started to think about my day
Oh I had so much fun on the hill
Even though I didn't get to have any pay
I still had more fun than I would at home eating my pills
When I finally got home,
I was really ecstatic to see
My dog and my pets from inside their dome
When I first saw them they had to go pee
When my pets came in it looked like they had foam
Around their mouths, but realized they were excited to see me
So this ends my great day
Wow what a wonderful scene
I 'm not ready for May
But hey I can be lean


1 comment:

  1. It was a good poem, but you may want to revise it because of the iambic pentameter.

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